5/12/16

WALT write a poem with metaphors.

A metaphor is when something is said to be something else.

Rose’s are kids dreams at night and at day baby dreams.

Every time you cut or crush a rose you are killing the dreams of kids and babies.

By letting the roses grow you are letting children dream.

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White

Vanila ice cream,

Dribbling down my chin,

Tasting so sweet,

Like a warm hug.

Fluffy clouds,

Taking weird forms,

Sometimes looking like animals,

Looking so close yet really are far.

Santas beard,

That looks like snow,

Bet it’s soft and fluffy,

But we’ll never know.

The feeling,

Of surprise,

When I get a big fright,

On a very scary night.

The bandage,

On top  of a bump,

Or a broken limb,

Or a cut.

Alice’s Scary Adventure.

By Caitlyn

Long, long ago in medieval times there was a owl whose name was not known but because she was a random owl, which once they chose what they say it is for life, she chose to say Alice so people called her Alice. So like all owl’s she was nocturnall but people are getting angry by the minute because Alice’s call’s are too loud. Once her call’s changed the world for ever here is the story.

Once when Alice was calling her loudest some elefantas from space hered her. Eliefantas are elephants mixed with a duck. They have trunks that are all the colours in the whole entire world in total it has an infinite amount of trunks but beware and be warned because quite frankly they are dangerous so the best thing to do if you see a elephant of a duck or both run screaming in the other direction ok. So they were mad because they were sleeping and when a elefanta is sleeping you never want to disturb it. If their mad you would wish you were never born. Now back to them being mad it was a fiery anger then suddenly they turned into a ball of fire and when they turn into it they try to kill who ever has annoyed them.

So first they had to gather enough speed because they were in another dimension finally they gathered it so they traveled but they were on the other side of the milky way so they traveled even more  and more and more then finally they hit earth but on the other side of the planet and were under water which cooled them down but they still had the anger inside of them so they swam and swam and swam until they faced Alice but Alice flew and flew and flew but they caught up with her and pulled her with them.

How Kapiti Island Came From

Nowadays Kapiti Island is a fantastic place for wildlife it is rocky on one side and on the other it is trees galore. It's steep on both sides like a mountain reaching up to the sky and when you hike up it is like your trying to reach the heavens. But I've wondered why it is just sitting there on the ocean like a hawk watching every move you make but where did it come from? Here is how I think it got here. Long long ago in the deep ocean of Nimboa, there lived an octopus named Piethan and a catfish called Tiffanie and they went for adventures.


"I wonder why it is so bright here it hurts my eyes" Tiffanie complained to Piethan. "Probably because there is nothing above us" Piethan answered, "we could make something, though!" Tiffanie exclaimed "it is no use for there is no clay for miles around" Piethan grumbled. Tiffanie thought for a minute... then suddenly an idea popped into Tiffanie's head it was to go all the way to the coast of Waikanae through lots of dangerous obstacles. So she told Piethan and they told their parents and started their adventure.


First, they had to go past enchanted kelp and seaweed that even the slightest touch can set it off to strangle you. Luckily there were pathways between it so if you are careful and lucky you would be able to go past  it so by helping each other they made it past. Next they had to go through the flowers of gloom where if you looked at them you will be parelised with fear and sink to the bottom of the ocean. The most dangerous of all was the water-nado and if you get within it's reach you will get sucked up for all eternitie never to return but they got passed it. "YES" cried Tiffanie "now where is it ah ha here it is now help me pull it up Piethan" so they pulled it up and it is now what we call Kapiti Island.

CrossStich

Here is how much cross stitch I've done this week

Red, White And Pink

Red, White And Pink

If you go for a walk by a garden there is shore to be a rose bush there . You may only see red ones but actually there is three colours red, white and pink. Beware of the thorns thank you but where did they come from I wonder and I’ve wondered ever since I could wonder. Well I’m going to tell you a story on how I think they got here. It all started a long long long long time ago the god of beauty Checkonahla saw no beauty in the world and believe me it was ugly.

So she had to think…… suddenly she had an idea but if she could just get some material. Something had caught her eye it looked sparkly what could it be? Checkonahla decided to follow it, she followed it through clouds ( she’s a god) and castles (since they are clouds they just go back together). Suddenly she remembered she had a bow and arrow that never failed her so she took a lucky aim and shot it. It lay as flat as a trampled flower and as still as a dead person “ YES” she exclaimed so with her sword at the ready she walked slowly to get a better look at it. It was her lucky day for it was some material just right for making the beauty in the world.

Now what would she make though she suddenly had an idea it would be a flower she just had to get coloured clay but what colours? She had an idea but it would not be easy to get the colours she had to go into the mortal world to get them for she was out of these particular colours. So she had packed all the things she needed began on her journey to the gates where she would ask the gatekeepers if she could go to get more clay. She was allowed to go on the journey so she flouted all the way to the stone and clay river where she got the colours pink, white and red to make roses and then she went back to heaven and made the roses.

Sand, Sand And More Sand

Sand, Sand And More Sand

Characters

Stars: Shimmer F brightest of all the stars main character. Glimmer F , Shine F, and Sparkle F

Crystal: moon who overreacts F

Narrator:sets the scene. F

Scene one Outer space   

(Narrator)”One night Crystal the moon was shining as bright as she can but the stars were still brighter than her especially Shimmer. Oh, how Crystal hated Shimmer and all the stars”.

(All stars and Crystal going flash many times)(All the Stars)”Look at how bright we are. Everyone in the galaxy can see us light up the night sky”

(Crystal)”Why can’t I shine bright enough so everyone in the galaxy can see me? I’ve tried so hard”

(Narrator)”Then suddenly Crystal has a very very bad idea. So she sneaks up behind the stars and scars them so they fall on to the place beside the water. Ohno Walnut the giant is coming”.

(Walnut)”Ouch I think I stood on something”

(The stars goodbye song)

Bows.

The Problem With Melody


“La la la la la la la” sang Melody.” I am much better at singing than you” she boasted. She was warming up her vocal cords by sing. It was after school and it was glee club but the teacher was yet to come.
 

(Melody only boasted when the teacher wasn’t in the room. But the little devil acted like an angel sent straight from heaven when a teacher was around). Then suddenly the teacher Miss Duck came into the room. Miss Duck waddles like a duck but she walked in so quietly that she caught Melody boasting and gave her a special detention. Suddenly while Melody was laughing, everyone dispersed and the music room turned into a box that had mirrors as floors and walls and ceiling. The mirrors showed her bragging.

“Stop stop” cried Melody. It had been 2 mins and she had tears in her eyes “ I’ll stop bragging I promise”. Then the box changed back to the music room and Miss Duck was there and so was everyone else. “Now I hope you’ve learnt your lesson” Miss Duck said to Melody. The End.

Today I Learnt

Today I learnt that mourning tea is 20 minutes 

Today I Learnt

Today I learnt that lunch is an hour.

Yellow

YELLOW

The sun on a happy day

The feeling I get when I get to school

Or when I see Mr C******

Or when I understand something.   

My happy poem.

Today I Learnt

Today I learnt that I'm a fast worker.

Today I Learnt

Today I learnt that my friend K****** is very fast at typing

MONSTER HOUSE

MONSTER HOUSE

They tried and tried but the batteries were dead. Now how would they call the police to tell them they were stuck in a house that had monsters in it. It was halloween and three kids were on a street that no one dared to go on. There was only one house on it and people  were dared to ring the doorbell and run away.

This time was different. They had to riying the doorbell say trick or treat and go inside. Even though they were super- duper- loop-de- dooper scared they refused to be could a chicken. There was this moment where  there was no wind and no movement at all. Then the kids slowly went up the  wooden stairs and rang the doorbell … then suddenly the carpet went out and swallowed the kids. It was dark inside, the kids had flashlights each. They turned them on because they heard low moans and groans. They realized they aren't one’s in here… there were zombies in the room. Dun Dun Duuun!!!

Suddenly there was light “it was only a nightmare.” Tom thought. It was halloween mourning and for halloween he is a snowman. He was going to have so much fun tonight.

                   The End

Today I Learnt

Today I learnt can be stupid as well

Today I Learnt

Today I learnt that Andy Griffiths can be really anoiying

My Spelling.

My Spelling.

Admiring I am admiring your work

Adoration

Appreciation

Civil

Defer

Disregard

Disrespected

Respected

Respecting

Scorn.

Today I learnt that I read really fast because I'm already up to page 60.

Today I learnt that my teacher is proud of me because I'm getting lots of work done.

The Tree Things

The Three Things

Do you have three favorite things? Well I do and this piece of writing is here to convince you that my three things are as swell as yours. Please comment in the comment space what you think of my things.

N.1 God. If there was no God nothing you know at all would exist. Not even you or me or the world. I’m sure that you all would like to exist wouldn’t you? No God no world no Adam and Eve so no one get the picture.

N.2 Food and water. If there was no food and water we would not survive for long so we would die quite easily. The world would be nothing but green. Even plants would die but there is that slight chance that they might not.

N.3 Family, Pets And Friends. You might not believe it but pets are important as well as friends and family. If you didn’t have family you wouldn’t be alive. The way pets are important is if you haven’t got a sibling or a friend you would be lonely but if you had a pet you would have someone to play with.

So for these reasons God is the best ( this is what I think) because he created number 2-3 so basically you couldn't live without God.

Today I Learnt.

Today I learnt that putiputi means flower in Maori

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Yesterday I Learnt.

Yesterday I learnt that after 1920 the Olympic flag went missing

plus the white =

Summer VS Winter.

Hello I have a question for you. Out of Summer and Winter which season would you be glad to be stuck with for the rest of your life? If you can’t decide then I have myself and this piece of writing to help you decide.

Now with Summer there’s the good parts and the bad parts. Let's start with the good parts. Now with Summer the children can stay outside and not cooped up plus there's christmas and my birthday.

Bad parts let’s see, there’s cancer and sunburn it could also get really hot. There’s moises and sandflies and other bugs. Plus the nights are shorter so kids get less sleep.

For Winter bad things first. You can get pneumonia and this can lead to getting ill or worse death. There’s also the problem with the coldness so you have to keep kids cooped up.

Now good things, you can have lots of fun skiing and sledding plus there’s hot chocolate and snowmen.

My conclusion is Summer is the best because there’s my birthday and christmas and kids can stay outside.  

Why I Should Be The New Rm 6 Librarian.

I know why these application sheets are in my class it is because you want different people for different terms.
So if you hired me there would be some great benefits...
Like how I am really careful with books.
When I see a book in the wrong place I put it in the right place and when I turn the page I turn it from the corner.

SPORTS OR NO SPORTS?

SPORTS OR NO SPORTS?

In schools there are so many subjects that kids these days don’t get enough sport. There are some teachers in my school that do sport like Miss Lumsden, Mr Williams and Miss Brown but not all teachers do.

We need more sport because when me and my sister go outside I feel more settled or take a cat for example when you play with a cat it’s burning off fat and it get’s tired.

Now there’s the problem with money. But if the government would just give the schools money for P.E. equipment then the hospitals wouldn’t need so much money.

Weekend sport is also a problem because kids get used to moving and end up fidgeting.

 Also the time teachers spend getting ready the children could have a run around outside.

I think that we should have more sport because of three good reasons 1. Your burning off fat and getting settled 2. If we got more money for equipment the hospitals would not need much money 3. If we did get more sport the kids wouldn’t fidget.

The Coffin Scare

"I'm here" I cried "down here" but no one could hear me. " If only I didn't go with to aunt Jenny's big party" I said to myself "if only I had asked where the" and then I shut up and went stiff with fear as something awoke. It had horns like a devil, fangs like a vampire and it was floating like a ghost except it was a swampy green.

I don't think it saw me, even though I was right in front of him, because it was soooo dark but that was not the surprise oh no no no the thing that really surprised me was that he walked right through me!!! I knew instantly that it was a ghost-monster. I tried to scream but nothing came out except speed so I ran up the stairs to the door and pushed as hard as I could and it opened.

Whareroa Farm

On Friday 17th of June room 6 and 18 went to Whareroa Farm. Have you ever been to that place? If you have then you will know how awesome it is. So when I first got to school I put my bag away and then I started to read and read and read until it was time to go. So I got my bag and lined up. When I was on the bus I sat with Krystal ( one of my buddy"s ) bus .On the bus me and Krystal talked and played hand games and before we knew it we were there.



When the bus stopped Mr Corlett said the group a people and the group b people, my group was b and Jessie's, Chloe's and Krystal's with Krystal's mum and Evans dad. Before we could do our first activity we all got a little talk. It was about not touching stuff for the oreintering. After the talk group b was on water critters. For water critters we needed to be in pairs so me and Krystal paired up. We mostly found snails witch is a 1 on the list. After water critters it was mountain climbing and I spotted a bunch of signs when I went up and down the hill. By the way we had lunch when we got down the hill.




After lunch my group had orientering and my last activity was bugs and plants. With the orientering you had to find numbers with letters. With bugs and plants I saw a died cat and I had to walk through mud and water.  When we got back to base my shoes were very mucky. But we had to go home so with sadness in my eyes I got my things and got on the bus. I had a lot of fun.

Pharazyn Reserve

On Thursday ninth June Arbor day rm 6 and 10 people from rm 19 went to Pharazyn Reserve. On the way to Pharazyn Reserve, we all went on a bus and I sat with Zoe and Georgia at the very back and like everybody else we talked until we were there. Then suddenly the bus jerked to a stop and I knew almost right on the spot that we were there.

When we were there we had a little talk from Rob and then almost everyone paired up. I paired up with Zoe and we started almost imedeintly planting. We were so impationte to get planting because we knew we would have a lot of fun.


After everyone had a fair amount of planting Rob said "come on everyone let's go for a walk" and we all stopped planting and started to follow Rob ( while we were walking we were talking). When we stopped I saw some pokecos and plants when we turned around it wasn't a pretty sight it was just grey,dried up grass and just looking at it made me sad but when Rob said it had just gotten its weeds removed I realised that in a couple of months time people will get to plant on them and they may not be you or me but they will be lucky. We all wanted to go on longer but there was not enough time so we sadly chatted and walked all the way back knowing these memories will go on and finally the bus was here and we all hoped on the bus to go back to school.

Today I have posted  a comment on Cara's learning blog.

Today I have learnt that my teacher can run. Newsflash did another T.H.L.

Today I have posted on Brooklyn's learning blog.

Today I Have Learnt ........

Today I have learnt to explain negative numbers. Like -8 and -10 and -9.  Just in I have posted a today I have learnt.

Today I Learnt...........................

Today I have learnt how to do a letter addtion problem such as J times E = 50 (count with your fingers to make shore)

Today I Have

Today I have done my Edmodo task and posted a comment on Faiths learning blog.

Fox Poem

Foxes 

The fox silently hunting for something delicious

 Looks like a thief with an orange, white and fluffy coat

They also look like they have black and white gloves

They can live in woods or snowy mountains

Today I Learnt..........

Today I learnt my friend is very very very very helpful.

Today I learnt I am good at improper fractions

Family Love

The reason for this poem is my school's care-taker's wife has died, so I thought that this poem might make him feel better. Hope you injoyed this please comment.

Feals like forever.

Awesome.

Must be mine.

Incredabul.

Lovely.

Young.

Love.

Own family love.

Very nice.
Extraordinere.

Today I have some maths

Today I Have Learnt

Today I learnt some 7 times tables

Name Poem

Careful.

Angel.

Incredable.

Terrific.

Lovely.

Youth.

Nice.

Please post comments.

Tagul Spelling Words.

Here are my spelling words.

Today I Learnt

Today I learnt what fractions mean and about numerator & denominator.

Today I Learnt

Today I learnt about renameing in math

Today I Learnt

Today I learnt to look carefully at questions & scwareing

ANZAC POEM

ANZAC POEM.

The bloody battle going on, but luckly the poppies stand strong on peoples chests. If your family member is in the war then you better hope and pray that they survive, if they do then they might survive two.

I Learnt.

I have learnt a lot in Mr Corlett's class here are some maths word. Translation=sliding Reflection=flipping rotation= turning

Today I have learnt that su doku is harder than I thought.

How The Poppies Turned Red.

How The Poppies Turned Red.

This is how I think the poppies turned red but be a were this is a made-up storie & if you suffer from seeing the word blood then instead of reading this storie go take better care of your self. One day in world war I Britain & Italy were fighting against each other. But sadly for Britain, Italy was winning.

The poppies (that had been planted before all wars as a comunity garden) had been wilting ever since the wars started.

All poppies in that time were white. But one night Britain was... Ambushed!!! Dun... Dun... Dun. The poppies that were near Britain when they died so the blood made them red. The blood is still liquidity so the poppies are still alive to this day. The End.

Here are my spelling words for this week.

please post some comments.

Today I Learnt.

Today I learnt how to use superlame so I could do some recerch about Bastion point. It looks like this. Please comment if you like.

Tagul

These are my ballet words please leave feedback.

Today I learnt to do reflections on my goal sheet.     Please comment bye bye.

Spelling Words

My spelling I chose for myself

word find

Try and find my words ;}

Home Words

Home Words ( hope you find them). Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase post comments =(

Today I learnt.

Today I learnt to make a graph(I am a powerful learner.

This is my sample graph....

Please please please post comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Spelling Words

Books I Read

Just some of the books I read

spelling words 

this is to help me with my spelling

My BFFs 

I put this here so I wouldn't forget my bffs

My First Blog Post.

By Caitlyn

WALT to post items on our own blog.

Hullo. I am Caitlyn. This year I have set some learning goals. This year I want to improve at

• my 2X tables and basic facts
• spelling for common words
• speed in writing.

Please leave comments and feedback for my posts and please help me improve